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In Case You Also Hate Goodbyes.

February 11, 2013

I haven’t had that many goodbyes to speak of, but I can tell you straight off the bat that I am not a fan.

They feel final and long, drawn out. Overdone. Severe as winter and hard as bone or something like that. Something that can’t be chopped into smaller pieces or fed to the dogs. At least the goodbyes that I have known were like that. Awful in their lack.

I have never stopped saying them either. Goodbye to my father, goodbye to this or that. I am always saying goodbye to you and yet here you are.

Here you are.

Of all the people that left me, none of them said goodbye. My father, gone. Up in a whiff of smoke. Boyfriends, like they’d never even existed in the first place. Men in the ether. Friends who vanished. No goodbye, no note, no I’ll see you around. 

Last week at the airport I saw this little black girl in the back of a mini-van, hair in braids and little plastic barrettes. Her father, (I am guessing) came off the same flight as I did from Boston. He opened the back door and leaned in, up close to her face. She started to cry. She was so happy that she actually started to shake and cry.

The kind of emotion you see in those moving YouTube videos where the father returns from Iraq or Afghanistan and surprises his kid at school. He walks into the kid’s second grade class and as they are writing letters on the board he speaks his kid’s name. The kid drops the chalk and the eraser and his shoulders shake before he turns around because he thought he might be saying goodbye to his dad yet here his dad is. Right here in his classroom on a Monday in winter. He cries the happiest tears and runs and hugs his dad. The little girl in the back of the mini-van was like that boy with the chalk. Maybe she thought she’d never see her dad again, if it was even her dad, and yet here was, his big face peering into hers and his suitcase filled with presents from Boston or wherever.

I thought for sure he would climb in and sit in back with her. He didn’t though. He got in the front and turned to face her and she wiped the tears and the woman driving the mini-van drove them off. Goodbye.

The dirt river feeling in my stomach when I leave London and my husband stays back to be with his parents. That piece of the river that doesn’t move, stagnant water sleepy and half-frozen and useless as a complaint. That’s my stomach on that flight from Heathrow. Gurgling and moving the bits of trash upriver and downriver and back up again as I sip a wine and watch England fade away. Goodbye.

What if it’s the last time I see you I say out the window to England, to my father, to the men in the ether. 

What if it is? What if it is? Then what? Then what? So many questions. 

Before the men who left me slipped into the oohs and ahhs at my sudden givings over to pain, to confusion: Wait! Where is my father? (I am always dreaming of my ghost-limb, my old battle wound, gaping.)

Oh Night! Take me back! I yell often to the wing of the plane but not loud enough for anyone else to hear. Just a whisper-yell.

I want to be back in the world between the headboard and the wallpaper, where my head presses to the vent and voices from the den travel up into my ears as small as baby fists.

Sail me into time! Maybe the hot tail of a meteor or a field somewhere in South Jersey. Say 1983. 

Drop me into a world before men: the Pre-Man Era. A glitch in time before men started in on me, before their fingers started in-all over me.

Before any could leave or not say goodbye.

Goodbyes suck. They insinuate this is it. They suggest No more.

Here is an open letter saying Goodbye for all the future goodbyes headed my way.

Dear whoever you may be,

Goodbye. I may have loved you and I may not have but this here is my goodbye in case you decide to leave or die or whatever. In case you forget. In case you thought I didn’t need a goodbye. Take mine as an offering. Take this as a small gift and know that you served me in some way. Just your presence in my life did that. I hope I served you just as well. We may not be able to see it now, what the good of it all was but still. Maybe you won’t even hear this goodbye. Maybe you died in your sleep. But still. I think somewhere you can hear it. I will sail this letter off and if possible I will literally stick in into your palm. If that is not possible I will deliver it in some way, even if that means through my imagination. I will make it short and simple and easy as a summer day. Imagine that? Goodbyes like butterflies. Goodbyes like falling. Like falling into the empty space in between rifts of a song. Imagine that? Goodbye, whoever you are. In case your forget. Or I forget. And if you come back and it’s me in the back of that min-van I will cry because for the longest time I might have thought you’d never come back.

 And yet. There you are.

But in case you don’t: goodbye.



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  • Reply jamesvincentknowles February 11, 2013 at 3:34 pm

    How could anyone possibly forget YOU?! Besides, true love & its compassion find forgiveness that heals even the shattered heart of no goodbye.

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  • Reply Penny February 11, 2013 at 4:33 pm

    Oh, Jennifer, not a good day to read this one. I’ll put it away and read it again when I’ve got my feet under me…thanks, you’re a sweetie pie.

  • Reply barbarapotter February 11, 2013 at 4:40 pm

    Wow I love this one so much.

  • Reply robert taleghany February 11, 2013 at 4:42 pm


  • Reply Tim VanDerKamp February 11, 2013 at 5:18 pm

    I hate good by as well. For all the good by’s I’ve said and the ones I’ve recieved I’ve hatwd every one. I think I just never liked the feeling of something being over …. Even when over was better or over was necessary or timely or even when over was going to propel me forward I still hate over and goodbye always comes before over.

    Another relationship just ended for me. I said goodbye ….. For my own sanity… For my own good. Makes great sense but ill miss her like I’ve missed all the hers and someone will say that ill find the right one some day who jibs silly…. They were all the right one and all the wrong one and the next one will probably be the right one and the wrong one too.

    So here I am…. At Mardis Gras… In New Orleans a place I’ve said goodbye to a dozen times and felt sad every time… And so unsaid goodbye to the latest her and said hello again to New Orleans in her prime … And she loves me…. So goodbye And hello all in the same week. This place…. She loves me… And I love her and so it is hello again… To my mistress the road and her sister New Orleans … Another mistress…. Hello to crawfish And bead and bands and fishing and Jivamukti yoga on Canal street in the hood… Hello to sunrises on the Mississippi River Nd runs down the trolley tracks on st Charles avenue … Hello to friends and to love …. Lo e of set or to others and love of this place…. And goodbye to love of a woman too lost in herself and her stuff to say hello to one more time and so I am joyful and blue all at the same time. Love lost …. Goodbye… Love regained … Hello.. All the same to me really. And so it is… Goodbye and hello. Bitter and sweet.

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